M: Where do you think you are going...
W: Just stop it, I am leaving
M: But I treated you good, you have everything you could ever want
W: But you didn't love me, thats why i am leaving you
M: I treated you like a queen, and this is how you repay me?
W: you treated me like shit, i should have listened to the people who told me about you
M: You know what, screw you then, maybe you should have listened to them, they don't know what they are talking about.
W: Screw You, you're selfish
M: No you're selfish! I treated you good.
W: But your never home! And when you are I can't stand to be with you
M: Fine, don't be with me, go then, you'll be back in the morning
W: Don't count on it
M: Ok.. Bye, say goodnight to the Bad Guy!
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i can feel the emotion coming out of the computer screen. this is wonderful you really were in touch with your heart on this work.
ReplyDeleteThe emotion is very strong. You can definitely feel the anger. This is not a very realistic conversation though. You need more interruptions and stuff. Overall, its not bad for a first attempt.
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