Top 5 Movies

  • Friday
  • The Hurricane
  • Through The Fire
  • Love Dont Cost A Thing
  • Walk The Line

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Christmas Pinata

Every Christmas Party
My Family gets a pinata
My uncles, aunts, cousins, and grandparents come to the party
All the kids get turns beating the pinata
It is my turn
I am handed the blue baseball bat
Ready to beat the devil out of that thing
I have three hits
only three hits to demolish it
The first barely leaves a mark
I look at the pinata and it seems to taunt me
The second leaves a small dent in the middle.
And out of no where, the third swing connects and the pinata is obliverated
Candy comes out like a giant waterfall
I see everyone rush toward me
I panic
Not knowing what to do with the bat
Everything goes in slow motion
I can't hear anything
It is almost as if it is a scene from the patriot, or some other war movie
babies are left on the couch crying while there mothers scramble for treats
I see my uncle dive in the middle of the pile
elbows are thrown
Sometimes if it gets to serious, a punch or two
You have to protect your stash
Just when you think its over
someone grabs the upper body and dumps the rest of the goods out
It's true, only animals fight over food
but when the pinata breaks
It's on

Friday, May 14, 2010

Film Analysis

Love Don't Co$t A Thing

Ordinary world: Alvin Johnson (hero) is in highschool, he is a nerd who works on cars alot. Doesn't get any girls and he is graduating soon. He is working on a car to win a scholarship
Call to Adventure: Paris Morgan (Hottest girl at school) crashes her mom's expensive escalade into a tree. He knows how to fix cars.
Refusal To Call: Alvin has $1,500 to buy a new part for his car he is working on to win a scholarship, he runs into Paris at the car garage, she doesn't have the money to get her mom's car fixed, he needs the money for his parts. But he gets an idea.
Meeting the Mentor: His dad, Clerence, is the mentor to Alvin, he is always telling him how to work the ladies "No women can resist the motion, BAM! of the ocean, BAM!". Alvin is also a mentor to Paris later in the movie, teller her to read her poetry and play her guitar if she wants to.
Crossing the Threshold: Alvin tells paris he will pay for the parts, and fix her mom's SUV, if she will pretend to be his girlfriend for 2 weeks. So he will become popular.
Tests, Allies, Enemies: Paris teaches alvin the rules of the special world, or how to get girls, the cool kids can't beleive she is going out with him, and they still treat him like a nerd, he ignores his old friends, and theybecome his new enemies. The N.B.A basketball player Paris used to go out with is a enemy.
Approach: The set back is, Paris ends up liking him, but he doesn't know it.
Ordeal: The 2 weeks are coming to a end and Alvin plans a huge break up, to make themselves look good, Paris tries to tell Alvin she likes him, but she doesn't get through.
Reward: There are 2 rewards, he is popular after he breaks up with Paris, but at the end he learns an important lesson and gets back together with Paris.
The Road Back: People find out he paid for Paris to be his girlfriend, he is ignored and treated like a nerd again.
Resurrection: At a basketball game, he stands up to the cool kids who are picking on his old friends, and realizes he needs to just be himself, "I like Michael Jackson's Bad album". His old friends forgive him. And everyone respects Alvin.
Return with Elixir: He learns the lesson to just be himself, gets his old friends back, and kisses Paris after the basketball game.

Sunday, May 9, 2010

The Journey

Martavious Sanpayne or "Tay" as people call him lives in the city of Pheonix. He has worked at Popeys chicken for the past 5 years. He has been graduated from highschool for 2 years, his mom lives near by, but his dad passed away five years ago of a heart attack, probably from eating to much popeys. He lives with his cousin Ray in a trashy apartment complex, they both make good money but they spend to much of it on clothes and other stuff, Tay's girlfriend, Lauren has been threatening to leave him cus he spends to much on clothes, and he hasn't got a "real job" yet. One day he came home excited to call Lauren and tell her he will be getting to open up his own popeys and it will give him alot more money, and that he is gonna try to control his spending, but he finds a note on his bed that says "you are not serious enough for me, so I am leaving with my sister to L.A."-Lauren. Now he has to go find her and tell her he is willing to change. Ray And Tay make the journey to L.A., hoping to find Lauren and get her back.

Hero: Martavious "Tay"
Ordinary World: Pheonix, trashy apartment comples
Call to Adventure: Lauren leaves him, has to go to L.A. and get her back.
Special World: L.A.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Hero

Name: Martavious Sanpayne

Age:20

Race/Religion/Gender:Mexican/Catholic/Male

Parents: Martavious Sr. (Dead) and Alicia Sanpayne

Style of Dress: Louis Vuitton, Versace

Hometown: Phoenix, Arizona

Marital Status/Family: single

Most embarassing moment: asked out this cute girl in front of a crowd, she said "Heellllll No"

Greatest fear: his girlfriend leaving him, not having a job

Strongest Desire: live in a nice house, get married

Job: manager at popeys chicken

Where he/she wants to be in five years: wants to own his own popeys, live in a better place.

Guiltiest Pleasure: Enjoys Reese Witherspoon Movies

Identifying Marks: His Louis Vuitton and Gucci Backpacks he always has

Mannerisms/Gestures: Looks out for number one, selfish... jokes about people.

What he was like in school: Did his own thing, had a few friends, some people took him to seriously so he wasn't liked by some.

Favorite Sayings: this food so good it make you wanna slap yo grandma!

Favorite Quotes from songs: "who you tryin to get crazy with essay? don't you know i'm Loco?"

Favorite Movie Quotes: "Murdock, i'm coming to get you"- John Rambo, "It's Friday, you aint got no job, and you aint got crap to do"- Smokey, "you have to be stupid to get fired on your day off!"- Smokey

Most Valuable Possesion- Pictures of his dad and him

How He feels about love: Love is important, when you find someone worth it, love them. Love your family as well

Philosophy on life: Spit your game, if they don't like it, they are ugly anyway. Everything you do, do it to the best of your ability.

Sunday, April 11, 2010

Adaptation

A Family's Song (from Dance With My Father by Luther Vandross)

“Remember this song Mom?” I asked, as we were driving from my house back to the old folks center as the song played on the radio. “Yes” my Mother replied, “your Dad used to love this song, everyday he would play this song for us before bedtime, ever since you were born. When you were older we would dance, sing, and laugh… and your baby brother Michael would sit there happy as could be, those were good times.” Yeah, I remember doing that when I was little, but the few years before pop died we stopped, “how come?” I asked. Well, Mom replied, “you got too busy with high school things, you were always out late with your friends or you were out on dates, but your father always played the song and would tell me how proud he was of you, he would always tell me how good of a son you were, and we would always dream about what your future would be like.” Your Father would say, “he’ll be such an amazing dad, and husband, that boy is going places.” Music has that affect on people son, your father used to say, “everyone has their ONE song.” It could be a song about finding love, being hurt, or just any old song that made you happy, he chose that song, because it reminded him of you.
I am brought to tears as the song is ending, I miss my father more than anything, I look and my mom is also in tears, the song is done, I turn the radio off just wanting to finish the drive in silence, I think of my dad, wishing I could go back to my childhood and listen just one more time with him. I can remember the warm summer nights at sunset, drinking lemonade with the song playing, and fall as the leaves turned colors, even the first snow, that song was in the background. We sure do miss him.

Friday, March 26, 2010

Blurbs

You Belong With Me (Taylor Swift)
Gretchen is band nerd in highschool, she has been best friends with Tommy since they were little, she wants to be Tommy's girlfriend but she is scared cus she is a band nerd and he is the quarterback. And Tommy has a girlfriend who is the head cheerleader and Gretchen is just on the bleachers, but she knows she would be better for Tommy than the cheerleader.

Sorry, Blame It On Me (Akon)
A Husband, Akon, is saying sorry to his family for all the wrong things he has done to them, like being away on tour when he should've been home with them, How he was in the streets alot making his wife help him sell the drugs, and how he wasn't there for his sons, he is just letting them know the blame is on him but he is just a singer trying to entertain people and kind of live a double life.

Just A Friend (Biz Markie)
Biz is telling his friends a story on why you shouldnt trust girls when they say they just have a friend, he met a girl at a concert and started talking to her who said she just had a friend, he didn't think twice about it at first and they built a relationship and got really close, but he called her dorm room and there was a guy's voice who answered, so he decided to go down and surprise her, when he walks in the girl is making out with another guy, and he decides to never go out with a girl who said she just has a friend.

Mockingbird (Eminem)
This is the story of Marshall and how he lost his daughter, he had a daughter named hailie, but he couldn't support her so his wife kim left him. He then hit it big with his rap cd and flew them out to california, but Marshall was busy with shows and still didn't have time, Kim became addicted to drugs and Hailie lives with her uncle now and Marshall wants them back cus he can support her now and wants a better life for Hailie

Cat's In The Cradle (Harry Chapin)
Bill is a businessman who has a son, but he is always at work and misses alot of his son's big accomplishements, he wants his son to be better but his son swears he is gonna be just like his dad, throughout the years he still misses alot of stuff and before he knows it his son is in college is married and has kids and now his son is to busy to see Bill.



Thursday, March 18, 2010

Story Song

Song Title: Dance With My Father
Song Artist: Luther Vandross
Link to lyrics

PLOT:
Luther Vandross is remembering when he was a little kid and his dad would dance with him and his mom, and he wishes he could be that little kid again and get another dance with his dad. But his dad is dead.

CHARACTERS:
Luther Vandross when he was a little kid
His dad
His mom

CONFLICT:
He wishes he was a little kid again and could dance with his dad, but his dad is dead. And it is hard on him and his mom that his dad is gone.

THEME:
Family
Importance of childhood and parents
a relationship between a son and father.

SETTING:
His childhood home, outside the door of his mom's room

Monday, March 15, 2010

6 Word Memoirs

Warm weather, summer time, Kool aid.
Daisy Dukes, Wife Beats, Oh yeah.
don't spend your time on hoes
spend your time on educational things
get all the knowledge you can
a smile can go the distance
basketball is life, life is basketball?
NaS is the best rapper ever
dont watch tv, tell a story
read, speak, write, tell, hear, listen.

Saturday, March 6, 2010

Grand Theft Poetry

THE DEFINITION OF A POET
Your mind escapes reality
Feeding your soul with words
Time Stops
As you sit and vibe
to the great poets
Shakespear, T.S., Robert Frost
NaS, Eminem, Rakim?
They tell me... NO
A rapper is not a poet
WHY?
Is it the curse words?
How they dress?
Because they took the road less traveled by?
Or said it in a different way?
They are still poets
for what is a poet?
There is no description!
No Traits
No look
No right way to do it
A poem lies within all of us
and within all of us.
Lies a poet

Sunday, February 28, 2010

VERY BAD POETRY (2nd Draft)

It's Overwhelming (2nd draft from "to many clothes")
It's overwhelming to come up with the words
to express how you feel
overwhelming like a mother
searching for a lost child
the pen starts to write
at first the mother is irritated
you are still at the lost for words
the irritation turns to panick
the words seem so far gone
panicked, tears flowing, words mumbling
she asked around and looks for the lost child
at the lowest point
when you are about to give up
the words come, as if they were there the entire time
the child runs into her mothers arms
the mother hugs her child with more love than ever
the page
the moment
the words
becomes peaceful

Friday, February 19, 2010

VERY BAD POETRY

THERE WERE!


THERE WERE PLANTS

AND ANTS

THERE WERE ROCKS

AND SOCKS

THERE WERE THINGS

AND RINGS

THERE WERE DRUGS

AND SLUGS

THERE WERE WORDS

AND BIRDS...



To Many Clothes


I have to many clothes

I don't know what to wear

It sucks like eating a pear

It's overwhelming.



Blogs


I have a blog

I had a pet frog

I will hit you hit you with log

now i will go take a jog.



WATCH YOUR BACK!


You better watch your back

this is a fact

running like track

im tired of the 20 sack

so watch your back...

and your front


She's all that!


Man She was all that!

all what?

She's off the map!

do you need to crap?

damn she was good lookin!

don't sit there, that seat is tookin





Friday, February 12, 2010

Impulse

M: Where do you think you are going...
W: Just stop it, I am leaving
M: But I treated you good, you have everything you could ever want
W: But you didn't love me, thats why i am leaving you
M: I treated you like a queen, and this is how you repay me?
W: you treated me like shit, i should have listened to the people who told me about you
M: You know what, screw you then, maybe you should have listened to them, they don't know what they are talking about.
W: Screw You, you're selfish
M: No you're selfish! I treated you good.
W: But your never home! And when you are I can't stand to be with you
M: Fine, don't be with me, go then, you'll be back in the morning
W: Don't count on it
M: Ok.. Bye, say goodnight to the Bad Guy!

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Four Alarm Fire

Meet Billy, He is nine years old and has dreams of being a firefighter, he and his elementary school class took a field trip to the art museum. As the other kids run around and are being yelled at by their teacher, Billy's eyes lock on a painting across the room, he walks towards it with a blank stare and sits and stares at it for a second. He envisions that he is fighting the fire, he has all the gear on, he just jumped off the truck, and the building is about to collapse. They think everyone is out but they realize there is one lady who is still stuck on the top floor. The Head firefighter calls to Billy, "Billy, you have to go up there and get her, Billy! COME ON!" Billy's eyes are distracted from the painting and he hears his teacher calling his name to go. Billy grows up to save many people from fires.

Friday, January 15, 2010

INTRO

My name is Antonio Montana, I came to the united states to find the american dream. I am from cuba but I hate communists. I stabbed a communist to get a green card to come into the united states, I become one of the biggest drug lords in miami. I don't have an education and i'm not the smartest man, but I know the streets. I came here to get rich and I did. Poetry has always been one of my passions when i'm not fighting off people with guns I am writing poetry about all that I have been through